You Are Here. Sharing Summer Writing at the Lane Libraries

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A spe­cial thanks to A.K. Reiber for shar­ing writ­ing with us this sum­mer.  Vivid imagery sets the mood for this scene.  Enjoy!

 

You Are Here” by A.K. Reiber

Sparta is assem­bling on the dusty plains inside your head, rot­ting teeth grit­ted in antic­i­pa­tion. Fists clench, and rivulets of sweat drib­ble down battle-scarred faces, and shrewd, mali­cious blades glint hun­grily in the white-hot after­noon light. Across the sandy sea, the enemy shakes in his armor. There’s a metal­lic rat­tle as their knees wob­ble weakly. One of the men turns and darts for the hori­zon, tailed by glances of both dis­gust and aban­don­ment. The sheer glory of Sparta’s armies must have chilled his very blood, you think. You grin at his back, amused at the bold­ness of his cowardice.

      You blink and the image fades, because you’re not stand­ing on the precipice of a leg­endary battle.

      You are here.

      The car­ni­val is in town—or at least, the town within your mind, the town with white picket fences and blue skies. A melody per­me­ates the air, upbeat and happy. The song repeats over and over in an infi­nite cycle. Laugh­ter rings like bells and you shiver with sheer delight. Lights are flash­ing in bright hues and rides are whizzing by and you are immersed—ah, bless­edly immersed!—in the awe of the moment.

      But you’re not there. You are here.

      Waves lap at the shores of your imag­i­na­tion. Mist tick­les your ankles as you wade ten­ta­tively into the shal­lows. The water parts before you, and a scaled hand flicks forth and pets the arch of your foot. A head peeks out of the water, sport­ing a mis­chie­vous grin. The mer-woman retreats into the deeper waters and beck­ons with webbed fin­gers for you to fol­low. You take another step. The water sparkles invit­ingly in the moon­light. It rip­ples, chuck­ling, as the mer­maid ducks under play­fully. Struck by a sud­den pang of des­per­a­tion, you dive after her. Your fin­gers catch her by the tail and she drags you under, into a world more mag­nif­i­cent than you would have ever known.

      You grin. Enraptured.

      But you’re not there. You are here.

      You are here.

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